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Thank you (: I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading it!! :D --Lucyy xx

Thank you both soo much, I really can't tell you how much your comments mean to be *beams* so thank you :D I'm glad you're both enjoying the story and ...

Thank you very much for reading this, and I shall fix that as soon as!! --Lucyy xx

Just a notice to everyone who read my story (and hopefully new people?? hehe :p ) that this is my final draft which I got A-A* for. Yayy :D I ...

Chichi -- Thank you soo much!!! I',m so glad you liked it, and also thank you so much for your detaled review - it will come in very handy, so ...

ashley -- Thank you for finding time to critique this - I can't tell you how much I appreciate it, so thank you.Your critiques always come in handy for me!! ...

Thank you all so much for taking your time to read and review this. Your comments are very kind and your thoughts will come in extremely helpful in the editing ...

Oops, I seem to have posted my review twice .. hmm .. I don't know how that happened lol d:

Thanks for PMing me and here I am for the promised review. However, I warn you now that this will be a long and detailed review as I'm trying to ...

fun4eva -- Of course I'm not angry, I'm still pleased you took your time to read and review this, so thank you :D & thank you for your thoughts, I ...

Thank you both for your thoughts, they will definitely help in my re-drafting process, so thank you very much :D & also thank you for reading this and I'm glad ...

Heyy, just to let all you awesome people who read & reviewed my story the grade I got for this first draft .. it was a B!! :D yayy (: ...

CJeanene -- Thank you sooo much for reading this & I'm glad you like it!! I must admit, that I do love that last sentence as well :wink: hehe. And ...

ashley -- Thank you for your second review, it's going to come in so handy when I edit it again - I love detailed critiques :wink: Thank you for your ...

This is now edited, different and hopefully better than the original post. Would love your thoughts on the new version!! Lucyy xx