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Hiya there, I will be your reviewer for today :D. I will firstly go through your whole piece and make any [comments/suggestions] or any edits/addings-in . I will then go ...

Hiya, there, I have decided to review your work for today!! :D First off I will go through the whole thing, making [comments/suggestions] and/or edits or extra addings-in , then ...

Hiya there, I have decided to review this little golden nugget of a story here :D . First off I will go through the whole thing, making [comments/suggestions] and/or edits ...

Hiya there, and first off welcome to YWS!! :D I have decided to review your piece for today (: --> Okay, this is very short and there isn't much for ...

Hiya, Pix :wink:. You told me you had posted something new so I just had to check it out. As the nit-picks have already been done, I'll give you my ...

Hiya, Oliv, I'm here to review this piece of work that looks a little lonely (: . So, here goes, I hope this helps you out!! =D [?] = I've ...

Yayy, I am the first to review *high fives*!! :D Anyway, I'm really excited to get on and read this chapter, so here I go... (: This one is shorter ...

Hiya, Ash! Sorry I'm so late getting to this story, I've just now caught up and read the both of your chapters :D . Everyone has been through the nit-picks ...

I am here to give a short review for a short piece!! :D Now a few things you could do to improve: --Whilst you're describing what this woman is wearing, ...

Hi there, I am here to review, like you requested! :D My nit-picks: and eat us for dinner --Now, this sounds a slightly childish thing to say. I don't know ...

Hi there, I was just passing, and I stumbled over this little piece looking a little lonely, so I have decided to review this for you!! (: My reviewing techniques ...

Hiya there, I saw that this was looking pretty lonely so I've decided to pop by and give you a review (: So, my reviewing techniques go as so: I ...

Well hello, we meet again :wink: - I see you've pleased us all and posted another chapter *starts dancing* . So, let's get down to business, ash (: :D .... ...

Well, there's not been much left for me to say... except why did it end ????????? You really do know how to work a cliff-hanger. If this was a published ...

My main review is in the word document, but here are some things I picked up on whiclst reading through it: Pansy & Roxy I would like some more background ...