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Re: Eff.
So, Diary, I was not finding the characterization of this girl very truthful. And then came the sex. Man, kids these days! He fingers her and she gives him blows ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Deep Love
wow. great job first of all. i really liked... Broken arms and broken bones is Nothing compared to a broken heart I’ve been trapped inside of my mind Till I ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Teenage love
My heart taken away Like the soul in my body just flying away And I, just flew into heaven Or is it you girl coming here with angels And I ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Weed or Acid
Give me weed Pound or two Take out all the seeds and sticks So my head won’t transfix With twisting and twirling And whirling I smoke the most On April ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Who am I?
Who am I? This is the question I am trying to answer. It's not the question of my name, religion or nationality, It is about my personality. Sometimes shy, sometimes ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: pain
wow. this poem is great i love it.. my good friend suffers with depression but truly i think every does. some people just take it further then others and think ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: I'm Sorry
first of all good job. no offense.. it wasnt the best poem ive evr read.. kinda typical. but the kinda poetry i write isnt like that really. sooo. :!: lol ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: A simple four letter word
wow! amazing i love this poem soooo much its true in our society people rush love, say it to much without a meaning, and bascially dont even know what the ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Jealousy
wow. ive tryed writing this topic many times. its kind of hard because jealousy can be in any relationship no matter what it is, my favrite part was.. Decaying friendship, ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Music
wow. first off.. good job. i love love love your style of writing poetry. like myself you dont make every word have to rhym. i love poetry like this. It ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: all of us are angels
okay. well first off great song..its a song right it was prettty short.. but sweet :D my favrite line was... All of us are angels, With dirty faces, broken wings, ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: The old and beautiful
wow! this poem is prob. the best ive read so far! its beautiful and dark and even though this is your first poem as a women (hahaha) it was amazingly ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Slamming Doors and Broken Hearts
wow. a very powerful poem it was pretty great... it reminded me of how parents sometimes fight and the children are in the middle with the part Caught in the ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Don't You Get It?
another beautiful one! i love this one the best i saw alot of different messeges in this but the one that hit home for me was this one messege i ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: A moment (for you)
wow! this is so beautiful in a dark way...! its kinda has two ways of forming in the mind. at first i saw the violent side kinda of being sucidal ...
Oct 14, 2008
