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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Art of Love

    Hi! Wow, you have such an amazing and creative way of writing. I love how the plot revolves around how he isn't really an artist execpt in...well, you know what. ...

    Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:05 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH

    Hi! Jash, that was truly amazing, probably the best thing I have ever read! Your detail was brilliant and the emotion was great. My favorite part was the end: Phanuel ...

    Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:04 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Draw Near To Me Chapters 8-9

    Hi! Sorry it took so long to review your story, really busy this week! I really enjoyed it, the twist with a new guy coming in to the story was ...

    Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:09 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The bus ride home

    Hi! I hope you are having a nice weekend. Just got your e-mail, I was just deleting a short story I was writing and began writing a new one, and ...

    Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:58 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Another Tear to Fall

    Hi! I was immediatly drawn to the poem because of the title. Here are some words about it: I’ve been broken I’ve been beaten I’ve been left bruised and bleeding ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 11:52 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: How sad is the peacock!

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading it! When I saw the title, I was curious and I didn't think that it would be that good, but you proved me wrong! You ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:35 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: How Can I Play?

    HI I really enjoyed reading your story. Please tell your friend that I am very sorry. I agree, it was a horrible death. I hope that she will feel better ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:29 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Waiting

    HI! I really enjoyed reading your poem, here are a few words: Solitude is the single note stung from your violin, Hehe, I play the violin. long and quaveringin this ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:22 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Finite

    Hi! Nice to talk to you again, how are you doing? So to reviewin! I really enjoyed it, here are a few little words: This world is ending, this spectrum ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:14 pm
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Iced Petals

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this. You did a wonderful job! Your was of writing is very creative and sweet. I thought everything was perfect, including the length. I hope ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:58 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Clockwork

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this! I thought you did a grand job! I really liked the middle part: Saturday afternoon, and the mail is here sealed with wax in ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:54 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: DELETED.

    Hi! I absolutly loved your poem. I really liked the mysterious feel you gave off and the rhyming sceme too. This part, I really liked: And this; this is me. ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:42 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Simple Love Note

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this! I love your way of writing! This was a wonderful story and of course, my favorite part was the end: He realized there was ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:30 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter 2

    The next day, I woke up late. I jumped out of bed, pulled off my pink cami and silver boxers, and changed into the yellow dress that I had just ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:06 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The invisible Piece (Love Poem Beware)

    Hi! I really enjoyed your poem, it was very good I just have one thing: The pieces fit together, better than a rhymes. Ackkkkk! It was the first sentance and ...

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:52 pm


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