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Thanks :) I've never named anything, didn't really get that it was a 'thing' before coming on here.

Thank you! :) The position of sitting was always on their knees (on the counter-top) - as that person is a child, something I hope to make clearer when I ...

Thank you :)

Thanks :) I was reluctant to add more details, so glad you suggest not to. I see what you mean about the "straight through to the other side" line, it ...

Thank you! As I mentioned in reply to another's review, the last line is not literal as such, more a metaphor for what is left when life leaves a body. ...

Thanks :) I hope it doesn't!

Thank you :) The last line is not literal as such, more a metaphor for what is left when life leaves a body.

Thank you :) Most people seem to be saying they like the shorter length, but want me to give more details? I guess I shall play around with it.

It seems that a lot of poetry on here is very long, which is odd to me as I mostly read shorter poems, so I was a bit nervous putting ...

I am indeed, or try to be. Thank you! :)

Thank you! I was kind of aware of how unevenly weighted the descriptions were, I started writing the male part, then had a freak wave of inspiration to write the ...

I really liked the rhythm, especially that of these few lines; "I've hid in the pews. I've broken His bread and I've sipped on His booze." - "You shook the ...