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Re: 2: Is This Real Life? Is This Just Fantasy?
Hey! Thanks for reading and commenting! It is very much appreciated!
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: 2: Is This Real Life? Is This Just Fantasy?
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it!
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: 1: What A Catch, Donnie
Thanks for the review! I am terrible with title's so I usually just name works after lyrics of a song I am listening to at the moment. "What A Catch, ...
Jan 27, 2015 -
Re: 1: What A Catch, Donnie
Hey! Thanks for the reveiw! That is why I posted this because I know what I want to say and I know where it is going so I don't think ...
Jan 22, 2015 -
Re: I Had Survived The Fog
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! In my opinion fog freaks me out especially when I am driving! /.\
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: I Had Survived The Fog
Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: I Had Survived The Fog
Thanks for reading and I am glad you enjoyed it!
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: I Had Survived The Fog
Thank you so much! RA stands for Residental... Advisor? D: I am actually not really sure what it stands for! But they are the person that watches over a particular ...
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: I Had Survived The Fog
Thanks! The roommate is actually based off my real life roommate and that is how she talks!
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Awakening
I would say something about how her eyes haven't seen light in hours - just to get across how long she's been in the dark. After "I got here." maybe ...
Dec 3, 2014 -
Re: Night Smile
Thanks! ^_^
Dec 3, 2014 -
Re: Night Smile
/.\ Lol I'm not really good with titles! Thanks!
Dec 3, 2014 -
Re: Acupuncture
"Maybe the new blood drowns the old masks the sin with forgiveness" I think a comma would go great after the word "Old" because I had to read it a ...
Dec 2, 2014 -
Re: If you're Peter, I'm Wendy
I like the third verse: "Sick and tired of all these rules, I'm too young to be this sad, Sick of society, telling me, how to be glad!" It really ...
Dec 2, 2014
