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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Today

    This was a very nice, cute and simple poem :) I enjoyed reading it and I like how you kept saying how you were feeling. The anticipation of being ready ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: White Coats

    Wow, I thought this was a really great poem. I can't say I can completely relate to it, but I think it was written so well that I almost felt ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Great Mother is Calling You

    Hey! I found this poem to be really powerful especially because I know what it's like to travel from one country to another, I moved to America when I was ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Own World

    Hello! This was great, it was short and simple and I absolutely loved it because it's easy to relate to. I spend most of my time in my own world ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Beginning of Our Life

    This was just amazing! I got chills reading it! It just gave me a really warm and nice feeling all over. The rhyming scheme was just perfect and it's one ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Will you cry?

    Overall, I really liked this. It was powerful and had a lot of emotion in it. I think that you could add a little more length and detail to your ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a kind of closure

    This is really a very powerful poem. I love all the descriptive adjectives and imagery. Everything appeals to the sense. picked away at the crimson heads of fresh scabs You ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tomorrow, yesterday, but never today

    This is really good. I love the rhyming scheme and it's simple and to the point. Your writing is very light and easy to read. I used to love poems ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Frost

    I love how simple, short, and straight to the point this is. Yet it brings out such a powerful message. It makes me somewhat nostalgic. And I think that's good ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Finally

    This is really good! I really like it especially because I feel like I know exactly what you are going through. I like the way it was written very, very ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Oh, My Dear Forgotten.

    I think this was very emotional. The pain and emotion was just dancing in between the lines of your poems. Your point was clear, having someone leave you behind or ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: This Poem of Cliches

    That was so cute! I think the cliche topic worked perfectly! I wish I could do something creative like that. I've been trying to work on poetry more lately. This ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Piano

    I think this was a wonderful piece. I wish I had the talent to write something like this. The imagery was amazing. I've played piano for about 8 years and ...

    Sep 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: It Began with a Lump in the Throat

    You just said everything I haven't been able to in the past couple of weeks. Lately, I've been in a writing/poetic mood, but whenever I sit down to write just ...

    Sep 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Remember That Night?

    This was soo good. I wish I could write something like this. And you did it in three minutes! It really made me think and it was easy to imagine ...

    Sep 8, 2010


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