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Pinkie, it's your fault you hate it so much. But seriously, what is the magic word?

"It is just how I hate this site so much." It might be better phrased: "It is just how much I hate this site."

Meg, and you scolded me?

That's still not the magic word, Pinkie!

No, no, no. That's not the magic word either! I'll give you a hint. It's only one word!

No, pinkie. That's not right. Besides, that's two words!

What's the magic word?

But ya'll is basically the contraction of "ya will". Your state uses it incorrectly.

Nope, it's y'all.

"Short".

I belong to Slytherpuff! Or is it Hufflin?

*quietly comments* Lightsabers are made with heat, so blood would not flow since the wound would be burnt.

Hmm, title ideas: Devil's Rain Alabama Showers Clockwork Tears God's Tears Etc.

You scared me for a moment because I got the notif 211 reply to your review. I read it as: 211 replies. I freaked out momentarily.

If you are going to continue to review, DO NOT REVIEW CHAPTER FIVE FOR IT IS INCOMPLETE. Yeah, at the moment this story needs a lot of fine tuning. But ...