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Hey there Lu! Here to review your informational story. Who's gonna die?! Noooo another death in Happy Kid Land. This wasn't boring. You lightened it up by saying someone is ...

Here to review your piece. A sad heartwarming tale for Christmas. Man I nearly cried. You caught the scenes perfectly. I feel sorry for the little girl. Her life ruined ...

Ever since that first palindrome they have became popular. In my opinion, palindromes are interesting, as long as you get it right. If you really want to challenge yourself you ...

Here to review as requested! (BTW: Welcome to YWS) If my mind started caving in I wouldn't know what I do. Maybe I'll slowly go mad, speaking in tongues and ...

I am here to review as requested. I honestly am having trouble with reviewing this. The form is perfect (to me at least) and speaks like a madman trying to ...

I was requested to review (albeit I'm late) and here I am! Ok this was very...errr....disturbing in a humorous fashion. The bad thing is, is that I am reading this ...

Hey I am here to review as you requested! Ok this poem is beautiful and it holds meaning within it's words. If you need friends all you have to do ...

Ok, here to review! I almost forgot this story but remembered it when I saw the devastatingly full green room. Poor Jon, invisible to work, only seen to the one ...

Uh oh... She almost got busted. Then she fell back asleep.... Dang she sleeps all the time. Does being Hell's Gatekeeper make you tired all of the time or something? ...

I haven't read this is a while. Well, it's as good as ever. This is the shortest of chapter 6 and probably the most surprising of the three sections of ...

Hey there! I came to review as requested. Dun Dun Dun. When the Necromancer was actually the main girl I wasn't very surprised. I had the sense of foreboding that ...

Hi there! I am here to review as requested. I was a bit confused on why it was called The Necromancer until you lightened things up. I am interested on ...

Hey I said that I would follow your stories didn't I? Well I am here to try to review. Again you don't have any grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, punctuation misplacements, ...

So you asked if you should continue this and I read this thoroughly. I have an answer for you. YES! Continue it. This is epic. Btw welcome to YWS! I ...

Ok I am going to review chapter by chapter for it is too long to review all the sections at once. Chapter 1 review: ~??? Here is an image of ...