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Re: Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 11)
I am here to review Basil. I can't believe the romance is about to end. I noticed your chapters are getting shorter than usual. I can't blame you though. Chapters ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 10)
Hi again, time to review. I only have one nitpick to point out and it is very small. ~She really was and old soul.~ -Should ~and~ be *an* Well, that's ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 9)
Hmm, why does this piece have 0 reviews. Sorry for not reading it yet. I've been busy. At least I can be the first to review it. First dibbs! I ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 8)
Hey, I meant to review this but I kept getting choked up because of the end. Well, since it is review day, let's review! I looked through it for some ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Blood of Eden {I}
Hey Spark! Time to review! Ok I have a few nitpicks that I would like to show you. ~Only blind faith in his sister, Genesis had kept him going.~ -Maybe ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Five
Hey Lu! I am here to review. Well I would go on to nitpick but I saw nothing to nitpick. I'm going to be speedy with this before I die ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Three
Hi again Lu! Can you believe that I reviewed Chapter 4 before Chapter 3? What a silly mistake. Oh well. I did find one nitpick but it was so small ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Four
Hey, I am yet to review this. I reread this just in case I suddenly forgot everything I read a bit back. I saw no nitpicks so I am losing ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Christmas Eve
Hey Lu! I was yet to read this and it is review day after all. Ok, so I didn't see any nitpicks. Even if I did, I am pretty sure ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Duck Warrior Chapter 3
Hey again! I only have one thing to nitpick this time. A slight mistake. It seems you have forgotten a space between two words. ~Andrew guessed animportant duck or weasel~ ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Duck Warrior Chapter 2
Hey messenger! Here to review. Would you be happy to learn that I didn't see anything to nitpick? Well I did see an overuse of commas but you said not ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Quantum Mind: Science Behind the Story
Hey, here to review. Well, first off, I am unsure how to nitpick this since it isn't an actually story but it is something in the written word describing the ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Soul's Decay : Prologue
Hey there! Here to review. Also happy review day! First off, I didn't see anything wrong with it. No misspelled words, punctuation is correct, grammar was impeccable, and everything that ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Risk ch 9
I didn't see anything wrong that I could nitpick. Well, the space thing came back up again up near the beginning. Now that the nitpicking part is over (albeit short) ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Risk ch 8
Ok I would say time for the nitpickings but I saw absolutely nothing. I don't know if it is because I am tired but I saw nothing. Now past the ...
Dec 29, 2013