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I guess you're kinda tired of reading this by now, but the above are right, you do need to work on the last stanza... I don't know why... But otherwise ...

Otherwise No one really cares your boy is all the way in England, because we are not you and it doesn't matter to us. Thats a bit harsh! Also the ...

I just want to say that the past 3 posts probably aren't very helpful to izzy! Ok, now my review. I liked it! It was cute and funny, and that ...

I thought it was pretty cute! However there are a few too many syllables in the first part. For instance, generally lymericks have the beat: la la -la la la ...

Hi! I'm surprised no ones answered this yet. It seems really good! I too am a worshipper of Doctor Who. It flowed really well in most places, here are just ...

I thought it was kind of deep and meaningful at first, and I felt let down when it came to the end . If you are going to write a ...

Hi, No offence intended by this. I'm not exactly a brilliant or even particularly good poet myself, but I do like reading poetry, and to my ears this poem sounded ...