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Great story! If there were any mistakes, I didn't notice. I was spellbound :shock: It's so sad. And it's so true. Keep writing, Ysa

Very good poem from the other side of love. This deserves a gold star! :D

Nice work :D. The others have said pretty much everything I wanted to say. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

nice :D Love it.

Thanks for the comments! :D Conrad- The girl's the last person on earth. The other scenes are flashbacks. God (ooh. nice name :P) - Sadly, I'm too lazy to extend ...

Ermmmm... Her brother is still very much alive. The thing she'd lost was her hearing :D

The others have said pretty much everything I wanted to say :D. Ditto the cliche. It doesn't really grab my attention, honestly.

Thanks guys! :mrgreen: Tough I think it'll probably take eternity before I post the next chapter.

Yeah I was thinking about that too. My only excuse would be to say that she was fighting against her feelings for him at first, because falling in love was ...

I loved it! It was very moving. You have a great gift with telling emotions.

I just couldn't finish this story. I'm sorry, but this just has too many errors. I'll name some of a few (they're the italicized ones): Counting off the ways we ...