lon_205

That was really original and enjoyable. I liked the way you portrayed the different sides you were feeling, something we've all felt. Great job :)

The content was pretty amusing.

Ooh, dark, very dark. I like it, keep going :)

I'm really curious as to what will happen next! Is there more to come then? :D

I have to admit the first time I read it I was a little confused. But after reading your post about who was who, I really enjoyed it. It is ...

I really enjoyed reading this, just your spelling was a little off putting. The context was great though :D I like the idea.

A powerful piece. Lovely written. I like how each part ended with "because boys don't cry"

You've left me we a lump in my throat =)