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Re: Sabihah's Note part 9 and 10
Sabihah means beautiful. I have 3 more chapters to post. Yes they are kind of small..I don't know it's just the way they turned out. Thank you for you comment ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: The Stubborn Key
I know this is a little belated..but Thank you for all of your comments! This was just an experimental improv piece I did and I am not going to continue ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Sabihah's Note (part 5) drawing of Sabihah included
Thank you for your comment =) I have posted the next two parts of the story.
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Telephone Call (edited)
Hi Elinor, It is about a telephone call. The reason why I said "rewind like a tape" is because it impressed me so much that I can re-listen to it ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: A Kiss
The first letter of each line of the last stanza (I don't know if anyone noticed this) spell out MUAH, as in the sound of a kiss. Meaning wise, it ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Sixteen Winters
To me, your poem was pure pleasure. It flows so smoothly and has unique play on imagery. Honestly, I don't think anything should be changed in it. It is perfect ...
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: Enchanting Rome
I like the different perspectives. The story is interesting to read and it flows good. My favourite part is the beautiful setting. I am looking forward to the continuation =)
Jun 24, 2008 -
Re: Sabihah's Note (part 1 and 2) edited.
Hi =) What do you mean by beginning? the note part? Yes you're right, the interpertation part needs a lot of editing. I didn't think that last sentence was that ...
Jun 23, 2008 -
Re: Boone
I like this. Finally something new and fresh. =)
Jun 22, 2008 -
Re: Modern Penelope of Odysseus part 3
Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment! I made the corrections that you suggested. Soon I will post the next part of this story. :)
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Modern Penelope of Odysseus part 1
What does this have to do with Penelope of Odysseus? well this so far has been a frequent question, so I'll finally answer it. First of all...this is just the ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: ...
I love this. It's so original. It was apleasure to read. can;t wait till more is posted =)
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: A Night With My Lover
Although short, this poem has a perfect flow. It creates intense emotions. The only thing I could suggest is making it longer. I like it =)
Apr 3, 2008 -
Re: Dragon Bait #4
I like this a lot. To tell you the truth it wasn't long enough for me, so I can't wait to read some more! =)
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Run - Chap. 1
the words sound too formal for a normal conversation, as if they are pretending to be professors. Their fanciness is just a little over the top. But maybe I am ...
Mar 27, 2008