lluvialover

hmm this confused me. So he's in a desert with dark skin. At first I thought he's in Africa, but then viajero is spanish. What about the girl? And then, ...

wow...simply beautiful. I did find a couple mistakes though. Four hours of heavy lifting, and she’s finished the stage of arrived. She waits for settles in, but she’s too hopeless ...

I did notice a few spelling and gramatical errors, and thankfully I don't have to correct them. It doesn't bother me much anyways. I like your introduction because it was ...

I really don't like how this is stereotyped, nothing is interesting and original. Why does the most popular girl has to be blond with blue eyes, and another girl is ...

nice story man, I read it all. I actually thought that the Jesse guy was that guy with curly bown hair that she saw, but that he was not with ...

I undertand this story in my own way I guess. So the preacher makes a fool of himself by believing in the toaster being the God. Yet even after falling ...

wow! great imagery! although, No offense, but I never thought so much could be in a head of a thirteen year old. I have acouple of problems with it. Maybe ...

The poem is really strong and i like the way it flows, however I don't like the disgusting theme, but it is life...I really don't get the line "A whore ...