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Heyy chill girl. Haha things come and go :D Well firstly, i cant tell you wrote this out of emotion and true feelings, thats good. But keep in mind what ...

Nice poem. Can tell that you're writing from your heart, not just cos someone forced you to spit out something. Although some points can be improved on. Quoted from: "Don’t ...

Haha great use of puns there. No offense, but i dont really get the poem. :P maybe im just a literal kinda person. one point to note, try to use ...

Hey, great poem, full of emotion, the usual emotions that an average teen might feel. But personally, maybe you could change the context of it? Rather than setting it in ...

Wow i can smell your sadness. Sounds like you were really hurt. Personally, i think its a great piece full of emotion, i guess your wrote it fresh with hurt ...