lizzytink

okayyy... i like the idea that it seems as if the whole world left because you would lose your sanity quickly if you didnt have anyone to talk to. lolzombiess. ...

um its too long i think, it could've ended at, (please input text here) how does this work? what the heck? well any way i think the poem was pretty ...

um lets see here... o you need to be more descriptive. i was reading and almost fell asleep, well i am lying in bed, but thats not the point. i ...

preview the poem and try to think that your a kid. after all this is G rated. **I have no idea where this came from the words just sprung into ...

what the poem needs is more description. the setting needs to be more described. it is a little confusing when the bird is sleeping. Sleep my baby blackbird, Sleep till ...

word choice the poem would make sense if you added a little more to it and make a more interesting poem. needs more description. if you added a little more ...

wow its about a chicken and this seems a little dumb but you just needed to write something i guess. i need to do that sometimes to. it seems repetitive ...