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Re: My Parents Think I'm Gonna Kill Myself...
i just smiled and laughed to myself when i read this. sort of reminding me of those old time when i was stucked in like situations.... those time you just ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Wrath of a Grecian Moon
i see here you like greek mythology... i can sense the mood you put in this story..great! it's just that i suddenly remember this one book i saw at a ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Santa Fe Sunset
hey..liz here i gonna review your story a bit... "I always thought it’d be cool to be famous. I always imagined love would be perfect. And in my deepest dreams ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Preface
hey there... you know, i haven't finished reading the chapters yet...but seriously your story is good. some people may feel offended here (if they read this) but i gotta say...you ...
May 2, 2009 -
Re: old man Nic and the squirrel
you know, i've been reading some reviews posted in people's works here. btw, i'm new here. been seeing a lot of comments on puntuation again and again in poems. such ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Is this not love?
hey there... your poem looks good. it's just that when i read it, the puntuation marks, the commas, the semicolon seems to disturb the flow of reading it. you intended ...
Apr 4, 2009
