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You should have more than 4 comments But since I am reviewing this I must say.We Parade around in each others lives We conceive our hopes and dreams from lies. ...

Sunrise was unwelcoming, as it came earlier than Thunderstorm had thought. She lifted her head to see Sunhawk back in the room waking the cadets up. She looked tired, as ...

I had never had so much attention before in my life. It all happened in a blur. Right after I fought and the captain welcomed me aboard, everyone seemed to ...

As I am the first to review this and rate this I will tell you that there are some grammar errors but I really don't want to go into all ...

French Vanilla, come in several variations; all of them have their own assortment of toppings. After all, no two scoops are exactly the same. Two scoops. What I wouldn't give ...

Taint opened his eyes to find himself in a moonlit clearing, the leaves turned to silver. Roulette was sitting a few feet away with his tail curled over his paws, ...

Sister God Please you the lord is doing something in your soul because the will preach. I love the part when you said The snapping out of the phase of ...

So do you like animals? Cause this story is great have you any others? How long have you been on here? I am new here as you can see I ...

Even though it took me a long time to read it it was great. I really love it I just love the part when you said We left Scarlet and ...

I really love this what inspired you to write this. It is so good it is going to make me cry. So keep up all the goodness you have going ...

I just love this piece you can just feel the story drawing you in closer and closer till bam!!!!!!!!!!! It takes you in all the way you really have to ...

It has some errors but it is very nice so yeah. But one thing about this is it is really going to get people to like you because it has ...

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I really love this story it is not only a good one but has lots of detail.I will not only follow you but review some more of your stuff. so ...

I really like this poem to me so many girls/ boys but mostly girls go though this. It really is a nice poem I am new here and I don't ...