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littlebunny

  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: Psychosis

    I appreciate you taking the time to comment. When I published this, I didn't notice that some words were bold and blue. Sorry, I'm still getting used to the upload ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: Psychosis

    Jony, thanks for taking the time to reply! Your critique is very detailed and your suggestions were very helpful. I edited "Psychosis" and implemented your ideas. Your high praises on ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Fire

    I'm SO glad and slightly frustrated that line 5 caught someone else's attention! I wrote this poem around 2 years ago, and did brief editing before I submitted it, but ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Fire

    Thanks! I like to play around with personification, but I do believe this is my first successful attempt. I'm also a notorious pyromaniac

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Fire

    Ha I know the description is weak and a blatant lie, but I'm a newbie to this site so I didn't know what to write. As for the elemental series, ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Fire

    Thank you for being my very first reviewer! I appreciate your praise and insight on this poem! The beautiful thing about art (and perception in general) is that its an ...

    Jan 4, 2014


"I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul."
— Pablo Neruda