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Re: Psychosis
I appreciate you taking the time to comment. When I published this, I didn't notice that some words were bold and blue. Sorry, I'm still getting used to the upload ...
Mon Jan 06, 2014 11:40 pm -
Re: Psychosis
Jony, thanks for taking the time to reply! Your critique is very detailed and your suggestions were very helpful. I edited "Psychosis" and implemented your ideas. Your high praises on ...
Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:50 am -
Re: Fire
I'm SO glad and slightly frustrated that line 5 caught someone else's attention! I wrote this poem around 2 years ago, and did brief editing before I submitted it, but ...
Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:25 pm -
Re: Fire
Thanks! I like to play around with personification, but I do believe this is my first successful attempt. I'm also a notorious pyromaniac
Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:18 pm -
Re: Fire
Ha I know the description is weak and a blatant lie, but I'm a newbie to this site so I didn't know what to write. As for the elemental series, ...
Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:14 pm -
Re: Fire
Thank you for being my very first reviewer! I appreciate your praise and insight on this poem! The beautiful thing about art (and perception in general) is that its an ...
Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:07 pm
