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Re: A Hidden Sanctuary #2
I'm actually purposly making him cheesy for a reason. Weee! I'm happy it's it's at least a little interesting. I usually just write what I want to, not what would ...
Aug 3, 2006 -
Re: A Hidden Sanctuary #1
Actually, this is a redone version of a story I wrote about two or more years ago. I have the plot and stuff already planned and laid out. Surprisingly, I ...
Jul 30, 2006 -
Re: Prologue
i really liked this prologue. personally, i don't think you should change. it sounds kinda...odd to me when reichieru. not really sure why, though. i think this way makes it ...
Aug 27, 2005 -
Re: A Hidden Sanctuary-Chp. 1 now with revised version
haven't been able to get on for a few days. anyway, to explain the konnichi wa, it's just a fun thing they say between the three of them and it's ...
Jul 24, 2005
