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Well, this work was a great piece of prose. I would use a little more imagery: Scared he's going to kill me. Maybe you could be a little more descriptive, ...

Whoa. That's like all I can say. This is remarkable! Your imagery is unusual, but you write it in such a way that most authors can't get away with. "Tell ...

I particularly enjoyed this. :wink: I think it's great the way it is; not that much emotion, just sort of reminiscent. I like it. I honestly don't know what advice ...

Well, you are obviously very skilled at writing. But, I would try and make it a little less like Twilight (even though it's an amazing book, and you write your ...

Hey, I thought this was a really good story...you have great diction, and it was unpredictable. Yet, i understodd what was going on. Very nice work. :) Well, I found ...

hey, This poem is SOOOO awesome! I wish I could write as well as you do? How do the words flow so easily to you????????? LOL I particularly enjoyed this ...