listeningforthemuse

This was great. You did a good job of conveying the emotions of your characters, and in only a paragraph or two you had me hooked on your plot. Which ...

Wow. Well, you spelled a few things wrong, it was kind of choppy, and you totally lost me a few times. But it was certainly original and I laughed at ...

I'll pray for you I'm so sorry; I can't even begin to imagine the pain you must have gone through...and might still be going through. Though this poem really captured...what, ...

Wow That was fantastic, inspiring, amazing!!! And all sorts of other adjectives!!! One day all the roses died. Not all at once, just a few at a time. Some knew ...

This was a great poem, though at some parts it was kind of hard to follow. I thought you were talking about how Romeo and Juliet came to love each ...

Haha Man the story of my life - or any writer's for that matter. this was so creative and original! I loved the whole thing; and your rhyming stayed pretty ...

Wow I really wish I understood what was going on. Your wording was wonderful - I love how you described your memories. when you live in one place your whole ...

Definitely prosey. I liked it - it was like a smack to the face of young lovers everywhere. A bit rough; and a little too long. Needs a bit of ...

I liked this one. My favorite line was: Wind blows through orange flowers Glistening from light showers The imagery there was beautiful. Okay, lets get down to the nitty-gritty. Your ...

I liked it. But I didn't like the message it portrayed. Giving up is not a noble thing to do. Suicide is not some romantic thing that solves everyone's problems. ...

Wow This is definitely one of - if not THE - best poem I have read on this website. Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I love how you don't make it cheesy ...

I like the beginning. Where she's upset, and you're comforting her. I think that you should incorporate into your story this part of the intro: My exgirlfriend (I hate referring ...

Hmmm... Is love a crash course? Can YOU look ME in the eye and tell me that none of it - not a single, solitary second - was worth it? ...

Wait Let me get this straight... You WANT a broken heart? Okay, let me explain this. Have you ever broken a bone? You know the excruciating pain, and you're like, ...

Ooh! I liked this. I didn't really understand very well, but I liked it. So, were you mutilated by something someone told you that had great impact? No, thats probably ...