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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Remembrance Day

    As i said. My reviews are not the best. I can really feel the strong emotions attached to this piece and after each line the emotions build up, which i ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Beautiful Yet Sinister

    Wow, a very emotional piece, i really like it. (-.- it never gets easier, i seriously don't know how to review) All i can say is that it really helped ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Buckley and Rivers

    I remember studying WW1 it was an amazing subject, the British were so stubborn thousands of people were killed. Ever heard of the Battle of the Somme? 60,000 British soliders ...

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Inspiration where'd you go? *Edited*

    I felt the emotions you were trying to portray, and also the form was pretty good. (trying to sound professional ) All in all it was very good and i ...

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Ghost Blogs (Chapter 1, Part 2 of 2)

    This is a really interesting story, i think you should defiantly continue this. You added description of the insane ghost but still no description of the other ghosts, it would ...

    Jan 4, 2011


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