limaswork22

I found this story to be a good story. Alot of details on what happened during this particular situation. It made me feel emotion. He didnt finish the message which ...

It was beautiful in its rhythm and wording. I liked your way of explaining that fairytale magic doesnt exist but the magic of nature does. It was a great description ...

The poem was well thought out. You used amazing imagery. The poem came to life and when you mentioned winter in the poem I saw the garden die down.

I liked the suspence and tragedy. It gave me the feeling that the kid was desperate to help. The poem was knocking at my door! The fact that it really ...

The punctuation was a little off but overall it was beautiful! It gave me a really relaxed feeling. Im in love with the detail, and imagery. It was dark but ...

Beautiful! It speaks the truth. We all encounter people who judge one way or another. It is human nature. Although your poem didnt have enough detail I think it gives ...

A very well thought out, pretty and short poem. Only editing it once more would do the trick. I liked how it was about love. That is my favorite thing ...