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lilymoore

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Zipper of Your Pants part 2

    Ahh, here are the answers I was waiting for. I think that if I had had (needs another had) a knife, I could have sliced the air into chunks and ...

    Dec 4, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Zipper of Your Pants

    Lies are like a zipper; Made to hold things together, but under strain, hard to keep up. Ha, okay, I absolutely love this opening line. It’s catchy and humorous. The ...

    Dec 4, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fifteen 3

    Hey, uh, yeah, it's me again and no I'm not stalking you. I see you got a decent-length review from CastlesInTheSky so I won't drag on too much and I'll ...

    Dec 2, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fifteen 2

    I'm completely confused but utterly in love with this piece because it has such a resonant voice. Each character is unique and intelligent which is great and I can see ...

    Dec 1, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: House-revised

    This is a very cute piece and it definately brings new, interesting thoughts to ones attention. But you wanna hear a secret, I only read it cause I love Hugh ...

    Dec 1, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Don't Fret

    Wow...I mean....Wow, this is really good. Like, in a moving sort of way because its so true. I mean, its something that absolutely anyone can relate to on some level ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: THEM- Chapter one

    I actually really like your characters. They have a good blend of stereotype and non-stereotype to seem very realistic and the whole situation sounds like something from my own high ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: L'ange Noir (The Black Angel) part 1

    This definately was an attention grabbing story. I clicked on it out of curiousity and read it out of a desire to get my 2 reviews. But I've gotta say, ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Angels, Devils, and Ice Cream

    I have a feeling my first review is gonna be a bit harsh but I feel I must be...truthful. In my honest opinion, this bit, hard. And a lot of ...

    Nov 29, 2008


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