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  • Other » General, General Re: Feeling Emotions in the Dark.

    Hey there Freak (I mean it in the nice way, I promise)! So, right off the bat, I’m going to have to point out that this is quite short so ...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Mission Zero

    I’m so sorry I haven’t gotten to this until now Pretty Crazy. I completely forgot to check my Will Review for Food thread. *head/desk* And it seems all of the ...

    Aug 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Cinnamon Rolls on Tuesday (Part I)

    SHINA! I’m totally here…now is when you should totally fear. A Few Nitpicks Cody got ya’ some Red Bull and you hid em’ in those sleeves of yours?” This feels ...

    Jul 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Heritage - Chapter 1.1

    Hey there user whose name I don’t know how to pronounce. Here to review, as requested. So let’s begin with some nitpicks. Nitpicks I should mention, I didn’t really look ...

    Jul 28, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: zombies on the roof

    Hey playerj. Since Bickazer did such a thorough review as far as nitpicks go, I figured I would put more focus on the more major details of the story. Plot ...

    Jul 28, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Vindicated

    Hello Sunny. Sorry it took me as long as it did to get to this review…my days have been rather hectic lately and my nights (when I review) have been ...

    Jul 28, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Raining Mirrors

    Guess who! Nitpicks In winter here, when it rains it lasts for days -- though usually it isn't as heavy as this. Ha, first nitpick. :D But really, this makes ...

    Jul 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: London Rain

    Guess who! Are you guessing? How about now? Oh I’ll just tell you. It’s Lily, here to review. The rain falls, the rain falls. To a time where the clocks ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Butterfly Effect

    Hey there pink. So, poetry isn’t generally my strongest place, but I can say with certainty that this is very good and it could be great with a little work. ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The (True) Story of Hansel and Gretel : Intro

    Hey blue. It’s lily, here with my review for you!!!! Nitpicks I still have local villagers banging on my door everyday demanding that I be burned at the stake! The ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Luna 1

    Hey pinkie angel, here with your review….just really behind. *oops* I had been waiting for her for 15 years. 15 should be written out, as it looks more formal. …wiped ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Wyndolyn

    OMG Dakota, I’m so sorry I haven’t gotten to this sooner. But sense this is the revised version, I figured I would review the updated version. Repetition The beautiful Elven ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Resistance [Prologue 0.0]

    I’m here, as requested, though much later than usual and I’m sorry I wasn’t as prompt as I generally am. But I’m here, so never fear…actually I’m reviewing at five ...

    Jul 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 2}

    Hey Shina, back for the second half of your torture session. Again, so sorry it took me as long as it did. ^^ Stella did the massive nitpicking but I ...

    Jul 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 1}

    Hey shina! Here as requested. So let’s start with the Preface She stood above all else and stared down at her world. The vast Nora Valley and the river that ...

    Jul 13, 2009


I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights