lilymoore

Oh, hey there TED! First off, the formatting of this is a little difficult to read because it’s a huge block. Paragraphs make things so much easier, visually, to read. ...

Ello MLFA! I had one little, technical comment to make. Your tattoo arm Full of Jesus This sounds funny because I’m pretty sure it should be written ‘Your tattooed arm/covered ...

Hey there Aush! ...and I’m no way near finished my paper. I think you might need the word ‘with’ after ‘finished.’ ...two lamps that sitting on my table, This is ...

‘Ello there Jackle! Mr. Knightly did a wonderful job reviewing you I see but there are a few things I want to mention too if that’s all right with you. ...

Irish! *snuggleglompnoms* I’m going to review the heck out of this and really pick it apart because of the fact that it’s a contest piece. Opening Line I opened my ...

Hey there Casey! Here as asked and since this is for an assignment, I’ll do my bestestest to help you out! August 20th found Ruth Beddow and Rosa Gomez sitting ...

Short, sweet and to the point. Hi KAH! Okay, I'll just give you an overview of my thoughts on this since I'm not a great poetry reviewer. This is a ...

Hey there LD! It's clobberin reviewing time! A cat. There it sat. Or rather should I say, there it lay. I love how you opened this with a rhyme. :D ...

Super Speed and I'm here! I won't go over this with nitpicks. There wasn't anything terribly significant although you did capitalize 'winter' again! I definitely did enjoy this part more ...

I'll just make this short, I didn't neglect your reviews, I just forgot to check my WRFF I neglected to find out if I had any review requests! :D And ...

And here I am again! *wow wasn't that fast?* Hazah! After going ten feet from camp, I heard hoofbeats resonate through the forest. I walked back and dumped the wood ...

Hey Rosey! I'm soooo super duper sorry about not getting to this sooner. I totally forgot about my WRFF thread and then I got swamped with finals. But on to ...

First off Skins, I'm soooooo sorry that it took me so long to get around to getting to your review. I completely forgot about my WRFF thread for like a ...

Hey there Maddy! I'm sorry I didn't get back to you right away. It's a long story that I've already explained like....three times tonight. I'm not up for doing it ...

Jenthura, I both laughed and struggled over some math in the course of reading this, but it caught my eye for the topic. I’m a total and complete animal lover, ...