lilithyoung

all of my poetry is based off my life. so you're in luck haha !

I think part of the poem's purpose is to be a little confusing, since the relationship between them is confusing. The protagonist is torn on how she feels about him. ...

I think she wishes to love him because of how close they are. They have a good relationship, but bringing it to that next level could ruin everything they already ...

oh jeez thank you so much i really appreciate your opinions!

thank you for your review! I added the word grey in that sentence because normally you would associate the sea with colors and life, in the fish, in the coral, ...

I wrote this from the perspective of someone who realizes that mental illness leaves their world devoid of color and happiness. So they go out of their way to accept ...

Thank you so much for your review! I agree with you, I could have put a lot more detail into this poem. I see this poem vividly-- I lived it. ...

The last line is in the present tense for a reason. "I choose it" means that every day is a constant choice to stay in the black and white. And ...

Oh my... thank you so much for this review! This piece really came from the heart and I love that you enjoyed it. I especially love how you brought up ...