lilian

Greetings! Jumped in for a quick review. Wonderful. Wonderful. Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I typically don't enjoy poems that play around with a lot of rhyme, but it suits this poem ...

Good evening. Just dropped in for a quick review. I just wanted to say, first of all, that I love the formatting. Even before reading the poem or the topic, ...

Greetings! Just popped in for a quick review. First impression, I liked the picture you painted. It reminded me of Willy Wonka. A slightly insane/sinister/charming host. You step into the ...

Well done. You captured the feeling perfectly. The choked feeling in your chest. The feeling as if that person got a snapshot of something deeply personal, as if naked. The ...