lilfeather2749

I love it! It paints a perfect (if not melo-dramatic) picture, and I think You did a wonderful job! I adore your word choice, even if it is slightly dark, ...

Oh wow, this is really beautiful! I absolutely love your word choice, it paints a perfect (if not melo-dramatic) picture! The only thing I think you could have done a ...

Hell yes! This is amazing, and truthfully, it reminds me of a hip-hop song, and its really great! You're right, men have to understand, us girls can kick ass, and ...

Oh wow, this is really very good! I love how it captures your feelings as well as, what I feel, every artist (whether they be a painter or writer) feels...wonderful ...

Hmmmm, I like it! Its very strait forward with out being over bearing, and vague with out being distant, all in all, its a perfect combo! The only part that ...

I really love this (: It paints a wonderful picture of hurt and (my favorite) teenage angst(yay!) The ending is very poignant, but also a little vague...I think if you ...

I really like it, and I disagree, i think It makes perfect sense, but vague. I think, though, thats it adds to the overall poem, its vagueness...I really Enjoy the ...