lil-mizzkitty1

hey, i'll make this short because everyone else has got everything covered. but i agree mosty. you've got to tell us how they met also small little things like Bryce's ...

hey, I loved this peice i felt like it was a little rushed but you explained everything great so it didn't matter. I like the mc I could really understand ...

hi welcome to YWS I loved this story. The style that you write in is very good. it was free and everything seemed connected. i agree you should shorten this. ...

hey im here to review, what a funny take on one of my favourite storys. by the way this is like me judging the entire story because i really dont ...

Hey heffa89, haven't seen you in along time. god you've had me on a cliffhanger. ive been waiting so long to find out what happens next. and david deserves whatever ...

hey i really liked this story but there are a few things i would like to comment on. the first is that i think this story is a little too ...

hey girl sorry i havent been up-to-date with you're other chapters(im on holiday in london) just wanted to tell you there great. greact bombshell. we really thought that David was ...

hi, your back yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees i totally love this story great chapter. i like that you expressed Helen's feelings. also i don't know what it is but there is something different ...

Hi, i love this story. i mean I've totally read it from the beginning till now. its just so.... great !!. you have really good talent. i love the way ...

hi. again you amaze me with your amazing story writing. i liked this chapter. what a sad girl. i really do feel sorry for her. kind of gives me the ...

HI I LOVE THIS STORY I MEAN IM TOTALLY ADDICTED ITS JUST SO GREAT I LOVE THAT YOU HAVE SHOWN US A SIDE TO Mariadelle. ONE THAT BELIEVES IN RIGHT ...

OH MY GOD WOW GREAT CHAPTER. I LOVE THE PART ABOUT THE RING IT GIVES A WEIRD TWIST TO THE STORY. THE DUKE WARRINGTON IS EVIL. BUT ITS GREAT NOW ...

HI, THAT WAS GREAT. I LOVE YOU MAKE US FEEL LIKE WE'RE WITH HER. FOLLOWING HER PAIN. YOU'RE DESCRIPTION IS FANTASTIC. IT IN THIS CHAPTER AND THE OTHERS. ITS GREAT ...

hi wow that was a great story i love the way the murderer sounded so posh. it was really creepy (in as good way). the murderer in most story is ...

hi i love the chocolate becoming the addiction thing. to tell you the truth even in these times chocolate is used to burn all burden. i also would like to ...