lifetimewriter

I really liked this piece. The only thing I can really critique is the capitalization. When the beginning words aren't capitalized, it seems somewhat unprofessional. But there is a lot ...

For a writing assignment, this is very good, and I really like the wording! It's a cloudy day in the mind of memory. ^^ I really like that! It seems ...

I really liked this, especially the last line: Hesitation is lost, and thoughts parried away of whether you are the angel instead. This being one of your first poem, you ...

I really liked this! The last stanza was my favorite, especially Almost broken, as if it Was unable to love As locks should be able to. I love the metaphor ...

I really like this. You made very fine points, and the whole point of reviewing is try to help the writer, not point out every little thing you consider flawed. ...

Very good, a little rough around the edges as you mentioned, but very good and heart felt. It shows what you feel without being hidden. Very clearly stated. What I’m ...

Great use of imagery, it makes it quite easy to imagine it. I agree with rayneisthename when she said that we all want to run away sometimes, and you captured ...

I liked it, but I think it was a bit jumbled and not clearly defined. For one, capitalizing your i's would make an enormous difference. Also, like I said, it ...