life_is_for_living

What kind of music did you have in mind going under this? I liked the repetition at the end and the chorus then the bridge and the chorus again. I ...

First off, It's a really good set up, and the characters aren't copied from anywhere, they're themselves, if you know what I mean. Any way. Here are some improvements, ignore ...

That's really emotional. It really make you think about other people. How do you do it? If you've never felt something like that, and you can write that. :thud: It's ...

I think this is really good. :elephant: You may want to put some more descriptive elements to it, and the beginning was a little confusing, but in all it was ...

I thought the books were well written, but absolutely murdered by the film. They were dire actors and could not act. Although Stephanie Meyer is a good author, she cannot ...