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Thank you for the review! I think you're right about it sounding a little artificial, that's something I'll have to take into account if I come back to this. I ...

Thank you!

Thank you! I'm glad it had an effect on you :)

Thank you! I'm glad it had an effect on you :)

Thank you! I'm glad it had an effect on you :)

Thank you! I've heard a lot that this is too vague and confusing, so I'm working on it.

I just meant if you are not feeling the story then I haven't done my job as the writer.

Thank you for your review. I am glad you found it a pleasure to read and appreciate the criticism. I am always of the belief that the reader is right, ...

Thank you! It%u2019s a subjective meaning, I guess, but if that%u2019s not working then it%u2019s not working. But yes, it was intended to be that way.

Thank you! I love your interpretation, there%u2019s no right answer. I just wanted to write something a bit ambiguous and cryptic.

Thank you! I don't think I'll be continuing this however, it was only meant to be a stand alone story. And no, it's entirely fictional, that's only to make it ...

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