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Re: He Had the Ocean
The imagery is used well. The pentameter keeps a good pace, with the rhyme scheme complimenting this- the poem reads well and has a very nice story like quality to ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: peace at last
The poem needs punctuation to dictate some kind of tempo: At the moment it is just a mesh of words in a column. However you do have a strong opening, ...
Mar 4, 2011