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Re: Are you for me?
just the way it is.... :)
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: The Queen of Dolls
This is kinda disturbing and ... well... scary. *shudders* good style but.... the content was horrific!
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter Two
please write more................ :)
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: Removed
:lol: Wow I love it...... LOVE IT
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: Debatable
loving the enjambement love it *clapping my hands until they hurt* Wow
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: Throwaway Lines
*clapping my hands enthusiastically* I likeit... I really like it :)
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: wanderlust
*clapping my hands enthusiastically.* I love it....... LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: A girls cry
Ilike the way you have your character behind glass... as if everything she wants is on the otherside but untouchable. Great stuff :P
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: His Prey
why write it as "you." That was confusing. I couldn't relate to what the characters were gong through. Maybe writing it as "she" would have appealed more??? lexy x
Oct 9, 2006 -
Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter Two
its great. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work :)
Oct 5, 2006 -
Re: i dont know why
I think its great. I read through it yesterday and encouraged my friends to have alook too. Keep up the good work..... lexy x
Oct 4, 2006