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ok, I agree with ani, but on a more severe scale. I acthidently bit my toungue from reading thith, and it ith now bleeding, justh a little. But it hurtth ...

its NOT poetry, lol. Its fiction. And the reason it is a happy ending is because the fact that the lie died! Lol, the lie was a baddy and so ...

I haven't seen any other accrostics... anyone written one that I can look at for infulential reasons. xxxxx

chapter eight it is then......

the above comment is true! 7...............

and then there was six ............................

Chapter five (god how many are there???) lexy x

the character sounds like a modern character personality wise. What era is this in??? straight to chapter 4 now xx

on to chapter 3!!!!!!!!!!

i'm going straight to chapter 2 !!! xxxx

It was good. The way you made a character and portrayed both side to her. Good stuff.

I liked this. We did stream of conciousness at school.... Its good! xxxx

And I think it flows well even though its depressing. Yeah it would be great song lyrics but as a poem it stands in its free right. It made sense, ...

great topic! I like this. My mum is dyslexic and this is a true example of it! Keep up the good word. But maybe change the "list" at the beginning ...

A job well done. I liked it although it didn't flow tremendously well.