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  • Poetry » General, General Re: 5 minutes outside

    This poem is very nice because it leaves room for open interpretation. In addition, the usage of certain literary devices, such as alliteration, really do allow this piece to flow ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: That Night

    What really struck me about this poem is your, or the narrators, development throughout this piece. There is undeniable emotion throughout this, which is definitely expressed eloquently. Your words fl

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Judges

    The beginning is very inviting. It pulls you in immediately, which some stories have trouble doing. I personally enjoyed the color imagery (or lack of it), the grey and universal ...

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Culture, Realistic Re: Staging Wednesday Chap. 1 - Wednesday's Dream

    I found this to definitely be relatable to virtually anyone who reads this. My main advice to you would be pace yourself. You don't need to tell readers everything about ...

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Literature, General Re: Delete

    This essay does make a valid point. Though I may be biased, considering I read and enjoyed Night in school, I do believe Night to be very important piece of ...

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Mr. Norton’s Windmill

    I really enjoyed this poem. It had strong color imagery, and the characters really made this poem work. The fluency was strong, and the writing was clear. This poem told ...

    Jun 12, 2014


I want to understand you, I study your obscure language.
— Alexander Pushkin