lemonayyde

Thank you for the review! I totally see what you mean, this is a rather old work and I am not much of a poet, but I will take your ...

Thank you!

Thank you!

Wow. That plot twist was...wow. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I absolutely adore this chapter! It actually brought tears to my eyes during the part with Lena. Great work as always! -Lemonayyde

Whoops, I did forget the periods! I'll fix that right up :)

Thank you for the review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

Thank you so much for the review! I was wondering if I should change some of the perfects, so I'll see if it sounds better if I do :)

I absolutely adore this chapter and the hint of bringing up "bride" makes me incredibly curious as to how you're going to weave the original "Persephone and Hades as rulers ...

I love the way you represented the underworld and the barrier! I have no comments that have not been pointed out by the review below. Wonderful chapter :) Keep writing!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading and commenting :)

Thank you!

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and that my poem made you think! That was what I was hoping for :)

Thank you so much for the review! I will try to fix that line :)