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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Night time Fears

    I absolutely love this poem! The style and simplicity makes it really fun to read, and the ending brings a sense of humor and wraps it up nicely! The only ...

    Dec 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Forest

    Hey Yasmindaiha! I really enjoyed this story! You did a great job capturing the bickering between two siblings and the creepiness of the old lady! I only have a few ...

    Dec 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Night

    This is a beautiful piece! Your use of imagery is absolutely captivating and really works well to establish the mood of the story. I do have a few notes, but ...

    Dec 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: Chapter one (An Unnamed Mystery book)

    I absolutely love the character you have given both Farkle and Jace so far! It reminds me a lot of how I interact with my friends, so you did a ...

    Dec 19, 2018


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