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Re: Night time Fears
I absolutely love this poem! The style and simplicity makes it really fun to read, and the ending brings a sense of humor and wraps it up nicely! The only ...
Dec 21, 2018 -
Re: The Forest
Hey Yasmindaiha! I really enjoyed this story! You did a great job capturing the bickering between two siblings and the creepiness of the old lady! I only have a few ...
Dec 21, 2018 -
Re: Night
This is a beautiful piece! Your use of imagery is absolutely captivating and really works well to establish the mood of the story. I do have a few notes, but ...
Dec 21, 2018 -
Re: Chapter one (An Unnamed Mystery book)
I absolutely love the character you have given both Farkle and Jace so far! It reminds me a lot of how I interact with my friends, so you did a ...
Dec 19, 2018
