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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 13 of Princess of the Sea

    Thanks so much!! I love positive feedback and I'll take your advice about Lord Tiernan. I am collecting feedback from everyone's reviews and will eventually release Princess of the Sea ...

    Jan 22, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1 of Princess of the Sea

    I've read 1984. Winston Smith is so annoying. Everyone is. Animal Farm is a lot more fun.

    Jan 22, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 8 of Princess of the Sea

    Thanks so much!

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Winter Raven: The Whispers

    I hope you keep going. This is better than my earlier stuff.

    Jan 7, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 5 of Princess of the Sea

    Thanks for your comment. I will be fixing this in the revised edition of the entire book, which I will eventually release after I've gotten input from all of you ...

    Jan 4, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 6 of Princess of the Sea

    Thanks, Queen! Your reviews are really helpful. BTW, I'm rewriting the entire work using input from you guys. I plan to release it in its new improved form when I've ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 5 of Princess of the Sea

    My outline isn't very detailed. Sometimes I don't even have one. I have it pretty clear in my head where I want the story to go. And, of course, you ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 4 of Princess of the Sea

    Hi! I'm so glad you like Henry, because he may grow up into another handsome prince in another story. Just hinting at what my next work will be.

    Dec 31, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 4 of Princess of the Sea

    Thanks! I'm so glad you love Wintress and Silira's muteness. If you get confused about Corwin being called Colin sometimes, I should explain. At first, I wrote the whole book ...

    Dec 31, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 4 of Princess of the Sea

    Thanks so much!

    Dec 31, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 2 of Princess of the Sea

    Hi, Cat. Um, in your spoiler, you say I'm supposed to call Silira a lady. She is. Corwin is addressing the gentlemen present, saying, "Gentlemen, this is Silira." Just clearing ...

    Dec 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Nothing: Autumn (4)

    Hi? Question, can you tell me if this is really a guy or just a girl who quoted something?

    Dec 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, General Re: Nothing: Roadkill (3)

    And being a hero doesn't mean she's suddenly normal and likeable and boring. Heroes are actually usually unpopular. She'll still be her. Or is it a guy? he/she will be ...

    Dec 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Nothing: Blemishes (2)

    Hi! Um, she's a villain? Oooookay...Fine. Hopefully she will un-villain later. Good things: it's not boring at all. She's detached emotionally, which is really kind of relieving. The part about ...

    Dec 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1 of Princess of the Sea

    Thanks for your review! Um, you probably already know this, but my name is Lelu and not Ielu. I'm assuming this was just a typo. But thanks anyway!

    Dec 4, 2017


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