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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 1 of Malgrave

    Maybe you mean Mrs. Gilchristie is the "matron." Thanks for this review. It really helped! I'm glad you liked this. There's going to be more, and I'll clear it up ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1.1: Ilami

    Hey, this is Lelu, planning to review this whole book. This seems really cool, something I could get into. Dramatic, but not overly so. It has lots of potential. I ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 1 of Malgrave

    Thanks so much! I'll be putting the next chapters out soon. There will be more stuff happening, I promise.

    Apr 28, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Still Waters

    You are too a writer.

    Apr 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Nothing: Blemishes (2)

    Sherlock is a high-functioning sociopath and Moriarty is a Mr. Hottie-Ness and so is Shirley

    Apr 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 18 of Princess of the Sea

    I mean, you should point out what's wrong, but also what's right. I struggle with this too.

    Mar 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 19 of Princess of the Sea

    Thanks for the review. Just so you know, it's "all right," never "alright," which is not a word.

    Mar 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 18 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey, Lareine! I don't mean this angrily, just trying to help you, but your reviews tend to be a little too focused on what's wrong. Of course, that is their ...

    Mar 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 17 of Princess of the Sea

    Love your avatar.

    Mar 26, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Gypsy Girl

    Thanks for your reviews, Jessica! You're encouraging while still being informative about what could be better!

    Mar 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 16 of Princess of the Sea

    Your reviews cheer me up so much. So encouraging.

    Mar 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 13 of Princess of the Sea

    You know, because of Chewbacca?

    Mar 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Princess of the Sea

    Hi, Blue. You're the second Blue person to review this book. In the beginning, you mention that you like the details about the mermaids, like them not crying, but I ...

    Mar 12, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Get Away

    Love this. Marta made the right decision, and I like that she watches her language while still being awesome.

    Mar 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 16 of Princess of the Sea

    Thanks! I'll put you on my mailing list.

    Feb 25, 2018


i enjoy repeating things twice in poetry. but only ever twice. nothing tragic ever happens thrice if i have control of it
— theromanticchemist