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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Forbidden fruit

    Temptation, so hard to resist Why does it have to be so sweet This attraction I wish to fight All these dark corners I want to detest My love, I ...

    Feb 7, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Undiscovered

    Well, first of all, I've noticed that most of your sentences start with "I". I think it would be a good idea to throw some other words in there and ...

    Feb 7, 2009


To have more, you have to become more. Don't wish it was easier - wish you were better. For things to change, you have to change, and for things to get better, you have to get better.
— Jim Rohn