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Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]
Scattered seeds in the snow Beautiful line. You've used alliteration very well here. xx
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
This is why I love poetry. Painting a picture with words! Keep on writing!
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: I know you.
I am a little bit confused as to whether you know him or not because at first you say you do and then you change your mind. Other than that ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Top Ten Reasons Why Women Are Better Than Men!
This is like an editorial. I LOVE IT! You are so funny. You should make more which are like rants. Would be a good read for me :D
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]
I think the title is such a shame. I mean it is a good title of course and a romantic one at that. However, is it just me or is ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Flirt With Me
I think there is a little bit of a muddle with your tenses. Sometimes I think are you talking about the past or the present. Overall, well done :D
Dec 9, 2010