lantol

Alot of use with short setences I noticed. Couple of grammar issues especially with "And than came that new girl in our group of friends.", 'then'. Overall there was a ...

I liked the way you incorporated elements of romanticism for this poem. Especially when you mentioned "Heart is like the Land". I enjoyed this imagery the most! :) Keep up ...

I liked readind the experiences you have made as a writer, although I was hoping for a pivitol point in your experience. Compromises which had to be made? Overall, I ...

Hi i'm lantol I found your piece lingering on the edge of philosphy; it questions our reason and existence and I found it a pleasure to read. Although I would've ...