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Hey great story and seems like the other viewers enjoyed it as well. I was a bit confused at the end about whether it was a ghost or not but ...

This is a beautiful story and i loved it. I find it great that you found inspiration from a little butterfly and it shows that you can find inspiration everywhere. ...

Hey just to let you know i absolutely loved your story! 1. I think that the plot is strong but just needs a little bit more added to it. 2. ...

Hi i think your story is along the right track but in some parts you keep saying then and i think you need to tie it down and edit it ...

Hey Your story really pulls the reader in and makes them want to read more like me. I usually find storys really hard to get into but yours was so ...

A dagger. Small and dull, but its size does not compare to the damage that can be done. Oh yes, this was the key to my past, present, and future. ...