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Lake Girls
Hey, so this is the first part of my novel that I'm writing. I know there are two parts there, but I'm trying to decide which one is better. So ...
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Lake Girls
Okay, so I'm trying a new angle at writing the beginning of my novel. I started this off with dialogue, it is nowhere near done but I just want to ...
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Lake Girls (Please Review!)
*Please don't use full caps in your title.* Hi, this chapter isn't finished, but I wanted people to tell me what they think before I go on.-Nicole Chapter One: Hot ...
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Lake Girls Chapter one: Hotdogs and wine
Hi, This is fourth try for the beginnig of Lake Girls. This one is defiantly my favorite. I have done a lot of tweeking, so please tell me if there ...
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Lake Girls, Chapter Two.
Hey,So this is the second chapter. Comments please. I still have some trouble with tenses and grammar, so please help anyway you can.Love,N Chapter two: Four hours of sleep does ...
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Lake Girls: Chapter Three: May & June
Chapter three: May & June “Morning my loves,” June Fisher sang as she sat down on a bar stool next to Brooke who now smelled fresh like Pomegranate and was ...
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Lake Girls Chapters one and two.
Okay, I have edited yet again! Chapter one: Hot-dogs and wine “She did what with what?" April Fisher asked in a voice that suggested she had never heard something so ...
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Lake Girls
Justin Blanche walked down the crowded halls of St. Alexander Livingston for girls and boys; he ran a hand through his dark blond tousled hair and stopped in front of ...
