ladymay

A great poem! I liked the use of metaphors and similes. It was very descriptive. Living in the bush, I agree wholeheartedly with the comparison of cities being like sores. ...

What an excellent story! I like how you switched between the two characters so quickly. It was a bit confusing at first, but when I got used to it, it ...

Oh, wow. This poem is so, so very sad and touching. I love the language you used. You really managed to capture the feeling. I almost felt as though I ...