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Re: The Snow.
Really cool! Makes me that much more excited for snow to blanket my yard. In many ways Winter really is my favorite time of year. Keep up the GREAT work! ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Removed by the author
Wow, really interesting. Not to mention attention grabbing! Reminded me quite a bit of Regina from Mean Girls. Haha, keep on writing this is great, dramatic, and even funny at ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Go Well (or Dead Friends)
Really makes you think. I had to read it once or twice to grasp exactly what you were trying to say, but I understand it fully by the end. great ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Jacob Black's War with a Mozzie
So interesting and well written, not to mention incredibly funny! I loved how quick-witted and jumpy it was. I wasn't sure what I was reading at first but I got ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: The Metaphor of the Tree
Incredible poetry! I love how the first part was so personal, I almost felt ashamed to read it. THAT takes depth. Life really is like a tree, branching out in ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Contest Entry- Poetry with a wonderland twist!
So fun! I personally think the Mad Hatter is the best character in Wonderland. He has so much to him that makes him an insanely cool dude. Keep up the ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Lands Unknown
A powerful and riveting message. It worked just right. Not too many details, or too few descriptions. Flowed like a cascading river. Nice job!
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Life
Definetly makes you think. We being humans do poison the Earth, inevitably almost. I especially enjoyed the last stanza because I think it brought the underlying truth straight up through ...
Dec 4, 2011
